"I felt the desire to move": Audience responses to "Goddess Rising"

Author's Note: This poem was created using found text from audience member's written responses to the Goddess Rising, choreographed by Sara Malan-McDonald, which premiered on March 31st. Immediately after the performance ended, I invited audience members to respond in writing to this series of prompts provided by the choreographer:

What did you see?

What did you think?

What did you feel?

What did you wonder?

What will you remember?

Why does it matter?

Those who consented to share their writing were aware that it would be used in a written work published online. The words and phrasing were kept intact although I played with the arrangement and composition.

"Women are resisting; women are rising and women are celebrating that which makes them uniquely human....Goddess Rising, is a deeply personal non-linear autobiographical modern dance-work based on the format of women’s circles. This dance intimately explores the power of divine femininity. It tells the unfinished story of one woman’s life-long spiritual quest to find a connection with a female deity-a Goddess." - Sara Malan-McDonald (Choreographer)


incense burning, circular patterns,

lakes, rivers, wings.

(always separated groups doing different things)

a group of strong, beautiful

women. open exploration

simultaneous movement

circular patterns.

the smell.

the collaboration

of so many.


the hope

the silence

the darkness the feeling alone

A religion that doesn’t appear to have room

for women

with questions

fighting against/reacting to

who want more than

what sloppy seconds they’ve been given

the hope

the silence

the darkness the revealing

women observing themself and other women

(I want you to write about this process. I would love

to read a written work of this.)


You opened like 10 cans of worms in this piece. I don’t think you needed to explain at the end, you could have just let us sit in the worms/let the weird/awkwardness and questions crawl all over the audience… At the same time, I wondered about different views of audience members.

The spoken word was very helpful. Otherwise I would have no idea what any of the motions represent.